Writing The Final Battle
Probably one of the most fun and challenging parts of writing Godmode is coming up with the final battle. My Content Editor is working on her latest novel, and came to me for some advice about the process of it. This is what I told her:
The final battle is the culmination of everything your story has been building up to. Basically, everything your protagonist has done, experienced and learned was in preparation for that one moment. and with it being a battle, it will be against a foe that will require everything that protagonist has learned to defeat.
take an inventory of your heroine. what are her special abilities? what has she learned throughout the course of the story? what are the weapons at her disposal? what life lessons has she learned that will be of use during this conflict? what weaknesses can the foe still exploit? why is it more important to your heroine personally to beat this foe than any previous one?
Now look at your villain, or whatever your final foe is. what are his special abilities and skills? what are his weapons and tools? what are his weaknesses? how far in advance would he have planned for this battle, or was he caught by surprise? most mastermind-type villains are very hard to beat when they’ve had time to prepare – that can also apply to heroes, by the way. Heroes like Black Panther and Batman are dangerous despite their lack of superpowers because they are meticulous in scouting their opponents and preparing for them accordingly. being mere mortals, they would get creamed in a fair fight against these demigods…so they make sure the fight is never fair. Or you can go the opposite route, with a foe that can adapt to any situation and turn it to his advantage (re: Captain America and James Bond. a villainous version would be Deathstroke the Terminator). Both types of foe present their own sets of challenges for the heroine.
Your final foe has to be able to push your heroine to the absolute limit of her abilities and endurance. This has to be her most dangerous battle, the one she is in the greatest danger of not making it out alive from. so think about your villain’s abilities and weapons in this way: how will this ability or weapon test my heroine? what skills and knowledge will it force her to utilize? what happens to her-specifically- if she can’t overcome that particular ability or weapon? Godmode’s final monster battle was the amalgamation, a mishmash of a bunch of deadly animals, that had an answer for everything Elijah tried to do against it. To win, Elijah had to utilize the tools of his environment, tap into skills he had forgotten he had, and …most importantly…not lose control, because his rage mode would have surely gotten him killed.
Now look at the environment the battle is happening in. your characters are not going to be fighting in an empty room, or even in a ring. there will be natural obstacles and weapons lying around which can help raise the stakes and the level of danger in the fight.a crumbling stronghold holds different obstacles than a sinking ship, which is different from a desolate battlefield or a dense jungle. The final battle in Kill Bill happened at a picnic table in a couple of lawn chairs in a suburban backyard. When you’re in a fight for your life, and you’re fighting for everything you hold dear, you’re going to utilize every advantage at your disposal.
it’s a shame you’re not into video games, because this is where knowing how stories are told in video games really helps. in most action and adventure-based games, you’ll have accumulated a lot of new weapons, techniques and abilities to get through the game, but to defeat the last boss, you’re going to need all of those skills and then some to find a way to win. especially in JRPGs like the old Final Fantasy games. your characters could be leveled up to the max with the best weapons, but if you don’t wisely utilize your attacks, spells and items, you will still get your rear end handed to you.
this is the fight where your heroine reaches her full potential, so don’t be afraid to cut loose and go all out with the special effects and collateral damage. If you get stuck, blow something up. it worked for X1999 and Akira. Dragonball Z and The Matrix, too, for that matter. and Man of Steel. and Pacific Rim.
another thing to consider is the personal element of this confrontation. how are the people involved connected? what kind of dialogue would they be having in the middle of this fight? What personal history or surprise revelations are going to be brought up? remember that moment when Vader told Luke he was his father. That revelation was made even more powerful because Luke had lost the battle, as well as his hand. it was demoralizing for him as a character, but planted seeds for the next phase of the story: how is Luke going to redeem his father? Inception’s final confrontation didn’t have a big fight, but it did have Cobb finally owning up to the truth about why his wife killed herself, and confronting that aspect of his psyche that had been sabotaging his efforts from day one.
As for the fallout…what is the purpose for your final battle anyway? what is your heroine trying to accomplish and why is the foe trying to stop it? And not in the meta “Save the world” sense, but very specifically: what exactly is your heroine trying to do, (press a button, deliver a message, drink a soda) and why exactly is this person or thing trying to stop her? answer that question and you’ll answer what to write about. in the end, your heroine will either be able to do what she set out to do, or she won’t. it’s as simple as that. start by writing that exact moment, and build off of that. i’ll even say that writing the aftermath might give you some clues as to what happens during the battle.